George, goodness knows that this thread (which must have broken some kind of record) has produced an extraordinary number of splendid pieces, but this one stands out for being hilarious. I think my favourite line is
xx'No chocolate,' he growls with savage breath
I agree that the 'disappointment' line reads a bit awkwardly. What about:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxSuch disappointment always pains,
xxYet he has dreams enough ...
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