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Unread 06-02-2013, 06:45 AM
Brian Allgar Brian Allgar is offline
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Being a glutton for punishment, I couldn't help wondering if it could be done as a palindromic paracrostic. In terms of rhyme, the answer so far is: not quite.

My goodness! Here’s a piece of prime erotica -
A gorgeous creature made from a rib I shed,
Demure among the tropical exotica,
And smiling as she nibbles on a yam,
My nubile nymph, my buxom Botticelli!

I’d love to teach her how to Mum and Dad ‘em -
Maybe that serpent had the right idea:

An apple from God’s deli, ripe and red ...
Delectable! Delicious! Mamma mia!
And now, let’s - oh, you're wondering who I am?
Madam, I’m Adam.

Last edited by Brian Allgar; 06-05-2013 at 02:56 AM. Reason: Changed a few words
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