Good one, Jayne,
even if it doesn’t rhyme
except in places.
(Still, this bit of tosh doesn’t even scan -
no! I can’t believe I’m perpetrating
ghastly vers libre at my time of life. Aaargh!
Horror! Shame!) But
to return to your piece, it looks as if,
famous for missing them, this time you beat the deadline - N.B.
but only by the skin of your teeth.
Last edited by Brian Allgar; 06-12-2013 at 11:54 AM.
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