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Unread 07-15-2013, 07:19 AM
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This one-sentence sonnet moves at the headlong pace of the girl dashing off the bus, through the house, and out into the yard for some total relaxation before the summons to dinner and errands. Although I was never one to let a snake brush my hand without screaming, I found this sonnet a perfect evocation of life at about age 12, as well as a masterpiece of pacing.
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