I like the high-flying meter of this — although at my first reading I was surprised to find it here, considering the judges. I like the detail of the snake in the garden (okay, field) with a girl, hummm. One cannot put those elements together, for me at least, without thinking of the loss of innocence. Okay, Miltonic it isn't, but refreshing, yes. I fell headlong into breathless the rush of it. Nice to see it here.
Rob
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