When Ly-le picked his pen up to write
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The floor fell quiet as a church,
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And Ann soon began to explain
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About flowers and the door frame
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And men | | who had known the girl’s name.
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L5 seemed tricky - a comma after 'men' would help, I think. I 'assumed' one there.
I'm curious to see how others scan it.
[This message has been edited by Jerry Glenn Hartwig (edited June 14, 2006).]
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