Just a brief thank you to Diane and welcome to the Sphere. I later decided that upset was better, before the crits began, but after I had sent it. Also a friend of mine suggested "for" rather than "'cause" and it isn't hard to see the felicity of that suggestion. I made another small change in L1. But since I never think I can write good sonnets, I was OTT to get in the top ten.
Andrew. As I said in my post #38, I thought Scott's L.A. voice was clever, but it isn't the diction I was striving for. It's OK to prefer it though, and maybe we will see some poems by Scott in that persona. Hope so.
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