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Unread 08-01-2013, 03:29 PM
Diane Arnson Svarlien Diane Arnson Svarlien is offline
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Thanks, Janice.
To my ear, "for" meaning "because" is precious, and its tone would (seriously!) wreck the poem for me. But maybe "cause" is a little too childlike (also, should perhaps be " 'cause "?). Hey, how about "since"!
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