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Originally Posted by John Whitworth
Yes. Slap on another verse and enter it. I think it's up to snuff.
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It's good indeed but 'slapping on another verse' would take it over the 16 lines... unless by dropping an extant verse (I think v1, though blameless, could be omitted yet leave the remainder still sound; v2 is fine to begin it).
IMHO!