Thread: Speccie buttoned up or open neck by 9th October
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Unread 10-01-2013, 07:58 PM
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Brian, I hesitate to say it, but isn't the second line a syllable short? Perhaps 'and beamed quite...'

I was thinking of Ogen's rhyming lines of variable length. But they're not free, since they rhyme. Mcgonnegal (however he is actually spelt)?
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