Thread: Translation Bakeoff Finalist: Rilke
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Unread 10-09-2013, 11:20 AM
Lance Levens Lance Levens is offline
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Everyone's commented on the problems, although no one has mentioned the rhymes. I'd prefer a full on "klangende" rhyme in the spirit of the author. Hats off to the translator. A tough one.
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