Fitzcarraldo
Astrid,
I like the idea of a "cobbler poet"; who would that be? The odd, missing 'c' in "struk" and the odd, appearing 'i' in "specticle" add to the comic confusion. "The Poet" puts me in mind of many of us here on the Sphere. I think you could tighten the ending by erasing that last line.
Steve.
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