It's a pity that the plural would spoil the rhyme, otherwise line 12 might have had a pleasing (and truthful) double-entendre as:
(And fonder still of having pretty blondes) ...
I'm still not sure that the last three lines are as good as the rest, nor that a competition judge in a hurry will spot the acrostic without the bold typeface.
Last edited by Brian Allgar; 02-12-2014 at 10:12 AM.
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