Thread: Sonnet 2 – As Such, A Simile; As Much, A Sonnet
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Unread 05-10-2014, 10:26 AM
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This one got off to a great start, but lost me after the first 6 lines, picking up again at the end. Might be better as a shorter poem, when the bake-off is over.
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