I guess I like this one as a sonnet best so far. (but I enjoyed reading #2 more)
But surely this is not about a crash. It is about the foggy snow-blind mind of an old man in dementia that used to be a trucker.
If this was about a crash I would find it awful, but I like the turn at the end.
I am still waiting for a sonnet to knock my socks off though.
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