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Unread 05-11-2014, 01:06 PM
David Anthony David Anthony is offline
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I myself like the bats in the belfry: ironic self-awareness and excellent use of enjambment. And children don't know beans is not to me a cliche but rather excellent deployment of everyday language to powerful effect.
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