Thread: Sonnet 6 - Streetlight
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Unread 05-11-2014, 04:54 PM
Jean L. Kreiling Jean L. Kreiling is offline
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This is successfully atmospheric, but sometimes confusing, and often metrically bumpy. And "Nothing Is In Store" seems like an odd "final notice."

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