Thread: Sonnet 5 - The Hoarder
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Unread 05-12-2014, 06:38 AM
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I enjoyed this one a lot. The only nit I have is the second reference to skin in line 13. There are two iambs available that can be used for one more reference to the aging body (or soul!).
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