Thread: Sonnet 8 - The Iamb
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Unread 05-12-2014, 02:56 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is online now
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I am not wild about the rhythm of L5, but I like the content very much, including the "I am" hidden diffidently in the title. I also like the mix of slant and true rhymes, which echoes the dissimilarities of the twins.

Susan
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