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Unread 05-12-2014, 03:47 PM
Barbara Loots Barbara Loots is offline
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From the title to the end of L14, this poet has pondered every word.

I particularly like "the eyes of ultrasound" playing perfectly against "his single silver ear." The line "you've always known which way your life was bound" layers meaning on meaning.

Clear, poignant, persuasive. Couldn't be better.
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