I like this one quite a bit! Day 4 is my favorite so far by a wide margin. Still, I wonder if any of these tinkerings would be improvements:
l. 4: "the carpet's blue" to avoid the inversion--or are we riffing on Columbus's 1492 ocean blue and such uses?
ll. 9, 12: "soliloquies, allergies"
l. 10: "and old age"--it's multiple actors for all the reasons listed, right?
l. 13: vary the repetition slightly for interest?
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