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Sonnet 8 - The Iamb
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05-12-2014, 04:49 PM
stephenspower
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I agree that dropping the "the" from the title would play up the "I am" aspect. My only nits are the eye of ultrasound and ear of stethescope. Everyone knows what these are, so I don't see the point of the images. Otherwise, pretty good.
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