Thread: Sonnet 10 - A Passenger
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Unread 05-15-2014, 10:15 PM
ross hamilton hill ross hamilton hill is offline
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I'd replace apart with below, ie below the waterline and then the sextet is fine. I think this is a wonderful sonnet despite my other comments, gets my vote.
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