Paddy, you are new, so I suppose you haven't yet learned that Eratosphere doesn't permit entering one's own poems in any thread outside the criticism threads (TDE, Met, Non-met, Translation, Fiction).
So you should erase this little verse in your post above (or ask a mod to remove it), but by all means send it to the One-Sentence-Poems venue as indicated in my first post. Nothing ventured, nothing gained.
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