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Unread 09-06-2014, 04:10 PM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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I'm loving these--mostly new to me. Thank you so much.

("California / dimes" in S8 of the Dean Young poem must be a typo for "California / climes", no? It seems unlikely that he's referring to $10 bags of marijuana. It seems to be "dimes" in all the versions I can find online, though.)

Another bee poem, to add to the swarm:


Beelines
by M. A. Griffiths

Out of the drowsing singing vessel

comes the bee in neat-nap velvet,

black and gold, armed as fiercely

as a paladin. She possesses what

I lack, the call of purpose. She mounts

the air, homing in on golden gales

of nectar trails, draws her sisters

to her treasure, dancer in the templed hive,

the singing dome, packed with shining wax

and generation’s curl and clusters.

Out of the droning honeyed vessel

comes the bee, and another and another

on a quest through scented strata,

armed like knights, like amazons.

Out of the sleepy humming vessel

comes the bee, bright with purpose,

fast as a star in her task, emblem

of what I lack. Sister in the wind,

mistress of the sun, small dynamo

of summer. The power that I lack.

Out of the throbbing solar vessel

come the sisters, gold and black.

October 2004

Grasshopper: The Poetry of M A Griffiths, p. 36; although I've edited the above a bit, in light of a hard copy draft her friend David Adkins sent me a photocopy of.


Bees also feature in Griffiths' "Firstborn" (p. 119) and "The Poet's Wife" (p. 246). The latter poem was probably inspired, or at least influenced, by the relationship between Ted Hughes and Silvia Plath (author of the bee poem that Maryann posted above).

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