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Originally Posted by Ann Drysdale
Oo- I'm going to be cheeky. "Quite" in the last line feels like a bit of a filler. How about "it would send her bananas"?
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Thank you, Ann. As usual, I posted an early version that I'll continue tweaking before I send it, but you've saved me the trouble of scratching my head over one bit that I wasn't happy with.