Yeah, even though the end of 'The Wasp' ought to be faulted, I'm also in the kudos camp for sheer... audacity! and LOL fun. The Ant seems to need a bit of tweaking in that last line, perhaps better punctuation. The Birds is, like the other two pieces, well rendered though the original poem per se doesn't do it for me. But yes, greatly enjoyed the translation prowess [and inventiveness] shown here nonetheless.
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