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Unread 11-21-2014, 08:09 PM
Charlotte Innes Charlotte Innes is offline
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Wonderful, Nausheen! I love the wordplay in the poem, and the off-kilter assonance. Favorites are "piqued" echoed by "creature," and "unarmed" and "enamored." Lovely!

Charlotte
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