Thanks, Susan and Claudia! Yes, that line is tricky. The sung version has quite a pause before 'mon Chou,' so I'm not sure I like breaking after a preposition like that, but it's worth considering. (It would also let me switch to a singular chair, which is a better rhyme).
Edited to add: the other thing I was considering with that line is to use the pause for more of a double entendre:
Reset the table and whip out your pair....of chairs
Last edited by Mary McLean; 10-04-2015 at 05:09 PM.
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