Birthe, I knew you could do it! You are a songwriter, after all. It's definitely your style, with its whimsy and playful humor. I find you can sing it to the original melody if you sing the last four lines of each stanza to the tune of the refrain. Some of your lines are a little long, so you have to squeeze some syllables together, which works well with the flow of the melody, or else you could shorten some lines a bit. Honey bunny! I love it!
Really interesting to see the different styles – Bob's classical and classy rendition, Julie's retro hybrid of two iconic songs, Catherine's playfully naughty romp. BTW, some of us got rid of the mole… Any thoughts on that?
Last edited by Marion Shore; 10-13-2015 at 11:47 AM.
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