The Power of Love in Quadrant
My poem 'The Power of Love' in the October Quadrant was workshopped here. I remember a discussion about the word 'ensorcelled' which many of you thought a bit over the top. Holly came to my aid on this one and there it is. I don't know anyone else who has used it since Sir Richard Burton.
I find workshopping very useful. My last poem was considerably improved by suggestions from Sphereans. It's off to Bunyah to see what Les Murray thinks.
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