Well, this is tricky. I found myself wishing I could give everyone a point in challenges 1 and 3, Julie having already won no. 2, but that would turn it into a caucus race.
So for Challenge 1:
Rogerxxxx- .5
Juliexxxxx- .25
Catherinex- .25
Challenge 3 is even harder. They’re all good!
I admired Mary’s version for preserving the original rhyme scheme, even though it meant losing the wolf.
There were a number of felicitous phrases: ‘wolf you down’ from Kyle and Catherine, ‘mutton chops’ for ‘moustaches’ also from Catherine, ‘stuff you like a goose’ from Kyle and Susan.
I particularly liked Roger’s fully and ingeniously rhymed version, and its snappily sardonic ending.
So for Challenge 3:
Rogerxx- .5
Kylexxx- .25
Susanxx- .25
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