S1L1 "People forget a little too soon." is off meter.
S1L4 "In a heart calcified to stone," is off meter.
S2L2 "Imprisoned in the night," is off meter, and the meaning is "Vanished in the night".
"Ça a changé mon horizon", where Ça merges with the auxilliary "a", as
Ç'a, one syllable.
S6L1 "No answers come to my questions," is off meter.
Having pointed out a few quips, my biggest objection is, save for two lines in the final stanza, the complete avoidance of rhyme, but chin up, because this is so heartfelt that we'll give you a pass.
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