John,
Your poem seems to have no rhyme or metre,
I cannot scan it into metric feet, or
spot a single pun. Redeeming features?
I've found none, nothing satirical or biting --
so what's the form? Is this free verse you're writing?
See Ann's new rule: In verse or else no fighting.
- Matt
Last edited by Matt Q; 12-05-2015 at 04:04 PM.
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