Wow! I don't usually embarrass myself by guessing, but this sounds like Elise Hempel to me. The piling up of images is ferocious, and the resolution turn at the end took my breath away. The lines with the least impact for me were 7 and 12, just because I don't fully understand them. I'm guessing L7 is the way they record something in baseball, but I thought it was strikes, which doesn't seem to tally with the team losing the ball. But I'm relatively happy to let sports metaphors wash over me misunderstood, whereas I feel like I ought to understand something about infinity. Can anyone help me?
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