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Unread 10-25-2016, 07:22 AM
Roger Slater Roger Slater is offline
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Why do you suppose the DG is American?

Wait, I see a reason. The comma is inside the quotation mark.

I like the sonnet very much but I'm with the anti-alas crowd. It's not just that the word is anachronistic, but that the interjected sentiment is unnecessary and intrusive. I don't need an interjection to remind me that a failed marriage is generally a bad thing, so "alas" does nothing but fill a beat.
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