Thread: Process of Elimination
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Unread 10-26-2016, 03:18 AM
Mary McLean Mary McLean is offline
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I'm with Michael on this one -- loved the first quatrain but Q2 lost me. It would be a lot better either as 10 lines or with a different second quatrain.
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