Well, this effectively erased that supposed sanctified sense attached to the event under consideration.
My la!
Beginning on the right foot, L4 abruptly ushers in a departure as it swears technicality is beyond reach whiles we recklessly force the steamy incident into this frame not unlike that woman's leggings (would I be allowed to call them?) and *cough, cough* enticement drawing the young man into his own, so speak.
Ah, but that finale too poignantly illustrates the happy incident.
Otherwise I like how the sonneteer less than subtly puts the dames in their place with that simile in L5.
Interesting and rather piquant, shall we say?
Last edited by Jennifer Gordon; 10-31-2016 at 07:45 PM.
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