I have to turn off my computer in a moment, but before I do, let me say that the line above ends with a stressed syllable, so the "and" can't take a stress.
You said things in your post that don't make sense to me. You said:
"I see nothing wrong with
"and a / GER man / SOL dier/ di RECT / ing HIM
but it will be anapestic tetrameter with iambic substitutions (or iambic tetrameter with anapestic substitutions -- take your pick)."
But that scansion shows five feet, not four.
Further up you said:
"I agree that on its own, the line you cite can't effectively be scanned as IP, but it could be a trochaic pentameter line with substitution if you put a stress on the AND:
"AND a GER / man SOL / dier di RECT / ing HIM"
But that scansion is tetrameter, not pentameter.
I think that first foot is a dactyl. I consider dactyls to be illegal in IP always.
I'll be back later.
Last edited by Perry James; 06-29-2018 at 08:58 AM.
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