John,
Yes. If this 'established poetic technique' were something that happened where we would otherwise normally expect to find rhyme, ie in some sort of pattern, usually at the end of lines, (as in mine and Walter's little snippets and Alicia's poem that Woody linked to) then I'd be more than happy with the phrase. I was disappointed to find no evidence of it in Zapruder's poems, which confirmed my original suspicion that he was talking like a pseud. Though he has given us some fun on D and A.
Julie - haha
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