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Old 09-12-2018, 02:14 PM
David Callin David Callin is offline
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Oops John. A misplaced poem there.

I really like it, Mark. I recognised Sky and Sarah immediately (and the boat that rocked) - what a great film that is - Marlon sings! (or does he?) It was Tricast that I had trouble with at first.

I also like the form of the poem. Who else has done this? It's very attractive.

I am wondering, slightly, what it is you feel have to prove. And there is something in what Jan and Erik say about the identity of the Tricaster. We don't need to know that it is your dad, and it would still work well if we didn't know - except, I suspect, for that last line.

But I pretty much fell in love with the poem. You had me at Runyon.

Cheers

David
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