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Unread 07-07-2020, 07:55 AM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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This is more relevant to metrical than to free verse, but I have always remembered Dick Davis's comment that the words at the ends of the lines should encapsulate the poem, so that by reading just the last words of each line, you have an idea of what the poem is saying. Because the reader lingers longer on those words (and especially if they rhyme), they should be key words that are worth lingering on.

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