View Single Post
  #12  
Unread 02-15-2008, 08:33 AM
Mike Slippkauskas Mike Slippkauskas is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: NYC, NY, USA
Posts: 740
Post

It's also a rhythmic, even metrical, masterpiece. The first line can be read as an entirely regular iambic hexameter with some very light stresses (on apparitions, and the prepositions of and in). The second line opens on an emphatic stress Petals, trips along with three unstressed syllables, then three lovely hammer blows, wet, black bough.

Sensitive modulation throughout.

[This message has been edited by Mike Slippkauskas (edited February 15, 2008).]
Reply With Quote