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Unread 05-29-2021, 09:34 AM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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Fliss, thanks for liking the dog poems I posted (some of which I wrote after the book came out). Thanks also for liking the title.

I made a slight tweak in "Cosmic Canines" (Post #62). Changed the penult line from "lost in the rays of timeless play" to "lost in a ray of timeless play." I think the full rhyme (ray/play) sounds better.

I hope you have a nice weekend, even though you have to work.

Martin
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