Hi Martin,
These are great. Congrats for getting the first into the Ekphrastic Review. I enjoyed reading it especially in combination with the pic. I like the imagery in S1 and the lead-up to the questionings. The final stanza is dramatic and a fitting end.
I like 'Grazing Up' too. I enjoy looking at the night sky. Good to see Jovial Jove again and Venus of course. I need to write a poem about a swan for my bird club, as our pen died recently :-( :>( (we are sad)
Lol at '7-Elevens'; yes, very useful. I was very well known to the staff at my local once upon a time.
I haven't had time to write my eclipse poem yet. I think I might have to start getting up earlier in the morning to fit in creative time amidst work :-/
Best wishes,
Fliss
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