Hi Joe,
I concur with the generality in thinking this poem of yours is splendid. Frankly, I like it quite a bit more than the Marmite/Fall poem you posted in Met! Though "savory and wrong" there is superb - thanks for that.
Somehow a villanelle is perfect for the task of Sisyphus as Camus imagines it. I am so glad the idea came to you and you executed it so cleanly.
I quite like the brain-cartoon, after my initial shock.
Cheers,
John
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