Oh! That's so fab. I actually commented on that one!
I'm so glad you kept 'hipsters' - it reads just right.
From memory, you changed something in 'homeless crazies' - was it 'your grandmother' originally?
Either way, 'homeless crazies' works beautifully to make us empathise even more with the narrator - it draws it into an external space of social awareness, too.
Sarah-Jane
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