Thanks, Roger and Jim
Roger, yes to proper title. It's just a working title at the moment, I suppose, with a nod to a song by the band Garbage. I hadn't even made the connection with the number of lines, lol. I really am useless. Anyway, I'm glad you like it.
Jim, you're too kind. I'm happy you have love for these two poems. Both were a lot of fun to write. I'll think about 'twinge-ing'. I suppose 'twinging' is with me quite a lot, but not with others of course. Are you tempted to write a first crush poem? I'm sure you'd do that very well 👍
Best wishes,
Fliss
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