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Originally Posted by James Brancheau
You wanted real poetry here, not jokes, right?
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I agree, James: that's poetry
and not a joke.
For what it's worth (little enough, I've come to think) it strikes me as intellectual, entirely about what goes on in the speaker's (and boy's and reader's) head(s).
I do like the poem a lot (for what
that's worth).