Hi Sarah,
I like the revisions here: the butterfly on the finger and close to blame, the new bird position, the globe looks to have a hole in it, and the hand and images line up better and have a clearer significance.
I think it's more developed now and you probably won't need the text at the bottom because the words and images are pretty much doing it on their own, at least for me.
I do like the dandelion seed ones, they kind of have a fingerprint effect on your original.
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